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[Quote] #11,321
13 Oct 2008 03:05 pm
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98supra wrote:
Reality number 2 wrote:
Swift-D wrote: Like i said stay on Topic .....

im bored and i aint bein serious with this rap ok


The lyrics ive written
im spitten
you know im from britain
and im makin a scene
you kno i bake up ma team


lol im bored


Bored? Nah you just fuckin suck/ when you spit, you fuckin cluck/WTF?/ all this time? N You still can’t drop a line/ You could use words like “pine and wine” and still not make the words rhyme!/ (get it?)/ Bitch! Swift? You wanta swallow?/ Ya head’s hollow “needs nutrients” so u better follow/ See I spent the same time on this spit then u did on urs/ Mine’s decent your’s is shit, your lips prob full of soar’s/ Ezz..

35 second drop ^


your an annoying nut//
that will be screwd//
I had a 3 way with your mom//
and some other dude//
HOw dare u come at Swift like that//
how rude//
commin at him with whack ass lyrics like that//
you should be sued//
I’ll wax that ass up//
And I aint using lube//


You had sex with a dude?/ I just ate “fried chicken” U goin make me lose ma food!/ God dayum.. your 'verse’s?' unbearable!/ 12,428 posts? 'versus' skill level? = “YOUR TERRIBLE!!/ And Shame on you! “whack lyrics” balogna!/ Your so phony, only time you hold “heat” is when you playin 'Halo' Homi!/ Pathetic words dispersed/ Instead of protecting Swift.. ya made it worse!/ Dayum..?

40 seconds^


12,428 posts

Fried chicken - reference to that he is black

User page ; He plays halo



- pussy bitch Supra, don’t call me out son.

Haha..
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Last edited 13 Oct 2008 03:09 pm by .R.3.A.L.1.T.Y.
[Quote] #11,322
13 Oct 2008 03:45 pm
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Ouch ! lol
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[Quote] #11,323
13 Oct 2008 05:27 pm
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supra. you really do suck at rapping. REALLY.
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[Quote] #11,324
13 Oct 2008 05:31 pm
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Not a bad verse,Swift
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[Quote] #11,325
13 Oct 2008 05:34 pm
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wat verse my 2 bars against you?
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13 Oct 2008 05:35 pm
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or my one i did for the sake of it and then reality comes outta no where and disses me lol
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[Quote] #11,327
13 Oct 2008 08:51 pm
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my rhymes are better than all
and if i recall
they are of the wall
if your bored go play your baseball
or i could just go rape yall
nigga im the best there is so dont try to disagree
that 100 percent guarantee to a tolerable degree
bitch you aint got my skillz
so take yo pills
and watch me make 10 straight kills
yah nigga i live up in beverly hills
looking at my shining grills
so to wrap it up bitch
lemme flick the ignition switch
and fly away an' be rich
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Last edited 13 Oct 2008 08:51 pm by MGHF123MGHF
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13 Oct 2008 09:16 pm
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98 Supra
Listen to my First “BAR” it actually is a comparison to a “CAR” 98 SUPRA
Likes “98 COCKS” inside of Him, He’s riding to much Dick
and bouncing up and down like “SHOCKS”/And Whenever he “sees”
a mans ass he Get’s an “ERECTION” He didn’t even get a
chance to Jerk Off no time to put on “PROTECTION”/98 Supra is
like a Pussy, and now she’s Getting a “Yeast INFECTION” I
spit with “PERFECTION” Supra is so Pussy whenever we voting
on whos the biggest bitch in here she’s Winnning the ELECTION
Let Me “THINK” wait i’m asian so hmm let me “CHINK”
You see when 98 saw this dudes dick he was like damn why so HAIRY?
it had him terrified like bloody “Merry”/You see he visits a lot of “Gay Bars”/
I mean look at his Verses.. all I see is “Gay-BARS”/ i’ll shoot you with my CAnnon
not the type on a “Boat”(my Dick) and I’m Fukin Yo Girl and she “naayyying” like a “GOAT”
she on her Knees like she was “Praaayyying” but then my Cannon began “Sprraaayiing” in her “Face”
98 is like a Cock Magnet, Always “Attracting” the opposite “Sex”
Always “Acting” like he doesn’t like the opposite “SEX”
Its Time to do your “JOB” now give me a hand “JOB”
Giving Me “DOME” Sucking on my “9 inch CHROME”
You Smell like Ass and “MUCK” I “FUCK” your girl on your own BED and she gives me the best HEAD
in the World, now the Bed was “Squeeking” my cum was “Leaking” out of her “mouth”
damn that bitch is Dirtier than the “SOUTH"
Last edited 13 Oct 2008 09:17 pm by AznSkillz
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13 Oct 2008 09:29 pm
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Swift-D wrote: wat verse my 2 bars against you?


the one against reality
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13 Oct 2008 09:41 pm
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Vintage wrote:
Swift-D wrote: wat verse my 2 bars against you?


the one against reality


JokeZ, nice.
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13 Oct 2008 10:07 pm
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Start at :12

spittin shit up off the dome,they say thats enough now//
i stay all up in that zone like I scored a touchdown//
what now?,im the illest,and Im killin it the hardest//
really get demolished if you really wanna start shit//
you’ll be departed,Mark Wahlberg,in different sections//
disrepect us on our turf and you’ll just get rejected//
get ejected like seats,got some heat for these chickens//
Halloween is comin up,I got some treats 4 you tricks kid//
ill have your feet in submission like that Rick Flair move//
bitches cant see me like they visions impaired,dude//
get it right,and get it straight,put MCs on dinner plates//
beat em up,then eat em up releasin' Vinny’s inner ape//
im finna make it to the top,mad hoes I’ll be rollin em//
rap like the only one with cash for petroleum //
showing them my might and the fight I’ve been holding in//
Dynamite in my mic..yeah it’s something like Napolean//..Damn
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Last edited 13 Oct 2008 10:09 pm by Vintage
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13 Oct 2008 10:09 pm
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Vintage wrote:

Start at :12

spittin shit up off the dome,they say thats enough now//
i stay all up in that zone like I scored a touchdown//
what now?,im the illest,and Im killin it the hardest//
really get demolished if you really wanna start shit//
you’ll be departed,Mark Wahlberg,in different sections//
disrepect us on our turf and you’ll just get rejected//
get ejected like seats,got some heat for these chickens//
Halloween is comin up,I got some treats 4 you tricks kid//
ill have your feet in submission like that Rick Flair move//
bitches cant see me like they visions impaired,dude//
get it right,and get it straight,put MCs on dinner plates//
beat em up,then eat em up releasin' Vinny’s inner ape//
im finna make it to the top,mad hoes I’ll be rollin em//
rap like the only one with got cash for petroleum //
showing them my might and the fight I’ve been holding in//
Dynamite in my mic..something like Napolean//..Damn


What is the Timing? Cause what I see the syllables don’t match the beat at all.
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[Quote] #11,333
13 Oct 2008 10:11 pm
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The first two lines should go from :11-:17
Try and stay at that pace while you’re reading it..
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[Quote] #11,334
13 Oct 2008 10:15 pm
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Vintage wrote: The first two lines should go from :11-:17
Try and stay at that pace while you’re reading it..


Alright -

Just a suggestion; You should have commas where the “slap of the beat” comes in (the loud part where it starts over).

Nice spit bro, good wordplay and it had a nice flow.
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13 Oct 2008 10:19 pm
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Thanks..If you can’t work it with the beat,I understand..It’s the internet so I can’t ask you to interpret my flow

I’m definitely gonna use that Napolean Dynamite line in the future haha..For a song,probably as the hook,it’ll sound like a sample if I can get a good DJ to mix it
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13 Oct 2008 10:21 pm
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im in the mood to battle someone. anyone up for it.
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13 Oct 2008 10:22 pm
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SPEAKERZZZ wrote: im in the mood to battle someone. anyone up for it.


I am up for anything, brah.

haha..
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13 Oct 2008 10:23 pm
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I would but I’m about to go to my room,lay down,and watch the rest of the giants game..Their defense is killin my fantasy team right now,and Jacobs is only doin average so...pz
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13 Oct 2008 10:25 pm
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Vintage wrote: I would but I’m about to go to my room,lay down,and watch the rest of the giants game..Their defense is killin my fantasy team right now,and Jacobs is only doin average so...pz


yeah i am def rooting for the giants right now. d is really bad but they’ll pick up. you saw how eli threw that last minute TD? sweet
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Reality number 2 wrote:
SPEAKERZZZ wrote: im in the mood to battle someone. anyone up for it.


I am up for anything, brah.

haha..



hahaha aiite spit a short one. or ill spit a short one. up to you
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