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15 Nov 2007 10:05 pm
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It’s for a class.

Love is a mixture of feelings and lies,
For love can only bring hugs, kisses and cries,
Some find love is the best thing in their lives,
Some feel that it is the way they feel when one dies.

When I think of love my brain gets caught,
Stuck on my opinion, hopes and thoughts,
I feel as though I am caught in a never ending soul,
And I continue to stumble and trip and start to roll,
And out of this roll I land down on top of my head,
Deep inside, deeper than my heart, I feel as though I am dead.

For love is deep, deeper than I or you can comprehend,
Because when all the love has vanished, you are to end,
It is a sickness so complex that your body cannot fend
Off evil and sad emotions my very good friend.

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My short poem

B Not too shabby ************* 50%
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F Hated it ******* 25%
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A+ I cried **** 13%
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A hands down **** 13%
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C Alright 0%
D Change some parts 0%

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15 Nov 2007 10:18 pm
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Eh... B... I guess. I got somewhat bored reading it... =/

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15 Nov 2007 10:18 pm
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ugh


nice job

im sry i click the wrong one sad

its at b i think

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15 Nov 2007 10:19 pm
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Who picked F?

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15 Nov 2007 10:26 pm
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Dhem92 wrote: Who picked F?



" looks around”

" rasies hand slowly”

me...

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15 Nov 2007 10:29 pm
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Jerk, why?

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15 Nov 2007 10:34 pm
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I picked B!

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15 Nov 2007 10:36 pm
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Dhem92 wrote: Jerk, why?



i felt like being mean heheheheh

also the poem is just to corny for me

and i dont usaly right poems so your more of a expert then me =/

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15 Nov 2007 10:38 pm
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Red_Calibur9 wrote: I picked B!



Yay!

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17 Nov 2007 02:42 pm
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my friend dashiki wrote this. rate it.

love by far is the most precious thing on earth
like a roses fragrance or a child’s birth

Love me and leave me thats the story of my life,
but it wont happen again see.. sense i bought a butchers knife.

ya, the next man that loves me and lives me so quick mmm mmphhh
Ima cut off his balls and ima chop off his dick

ima shoot that mother fucka, ima kill him
ima stab him, he fucking with me

ima run him over with my car, he fucking with the wrong mother fucka. nobody fucks with me.

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21 Nov 2007 08:18 am
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I think love is money but money no love...

tounge

Time is money and money dont know time
Money is a way and there are so many ways to get money
Money is freedom but freedom not money
Money... Money... Money...

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24 Nov 2007 11:52 pm
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Ah, I remember having to write poems for English class. IMO rhymes get in the way of potentially more powerful words. And I like to keep it short and sweet.

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