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I got the idea from hiphopave thought we could try it here do a verse through the perspective of something else EX. 50 cent (drug), nas (gun), and lupe fiasco (cheeseburger)

Here was a verse I did on hiphopave on Headphones

I sit on the head just blazing the shit/
Hooked up with a beat and a mic and your making a hit/
Leave ya spacing a bit/
The music have you swimming in your thoughts like you taking a dip/
Quick change the song so you can zone off again/
And turn the dial up at least five to ten/
Crank up the bass make your eardrums shake/
I got you vibrating like you’re in an earthquake/
Don’t make a mistake leave me plugged in/
No I don’t want to leave don’t put me up again/
I want to stay not put away/
Come on, no,stop, just push play/


aight up next verse - a bullet

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i chill in a dark place...seen my only friends go//
not knowin where they are...shits got me goin mental//
i hide from the light like when your death comes//
cuz they never came back...it must be the death sun//
the loud screams as they left..sumtimes 2 at a time//
hearin the cries from my fam made me wanna commit suicide//
but im still 3 back so i guess i can relax//
but everytime i hear the sound..i hav another relapse//
think of my best friend...he wuz the only thing i got//
yesterday he found the light..if only he had another shot//
wait...it seems im next up cuz im the only one//
nuthin pushes me out..sum called me fast..i jus say im runnin from the gun//

next topic- neighborhood-ghetto or suburban

Last edited 19 Jan 2008 12:14 pm by Vintage

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right in the projects, hear the echoes speaking/
gunshots out the windows, the basement leaking/
“pops can’t come home tonight” “why is he leaving?"/
“mom didn’t know what to say cuz he wasn’t breathing”/
“there’s no hope out here, no such thing as believing”/
“i saw your dad sprawled across, the woman’s screaming”/
the 5-0 is on the block, the car lights beaming/
the media always hits the ghetto, videos streaming/
“the victim was shot for not having paid his debt”/
“again? who’s next?" “i really don’t know yet”/
“he shot the man of the family, there’s nothing left”/
“let’s just hope the fucking bitch gets put under arrest”/
“and maybe take this shit slowly and go by the steps”/
“pray to the lord he’s caught and wish for the best”/

next topic: prison

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as “glocks pop” n “shots shock” who I “thought was my friend”
seems I’m the one who’s held back bein “caught in the penn”
they aint say shit, n this my “worst gun sprays”
this worse then that 20 year community shit up on “first sunday”
dudes all around in cells, not “one is my homie”
seems like the hood forgot bout me cuz “noone ever phones me”
I’m stuck in my jail cell, like a “rat it its cage”
reminiscin on the past when I was “blastin away”
I “lost all hope” seems like I “shot my hope”
I aint took a shower in forever, dont wanna “drop the soap” (lol)
I felt Isolated, knew no one like “new kids up in school”
this one dude somewhere out to hit me “I knew its his rule”
like Tupac n Biggie I’m “livin to die”
I’d rather die knowing the truth instead of “livin inside”

next topic - dead homiez

Last edited 19 Jan 2008 02:13 pm by .C.H.I.L.L.Z.

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yo its not a topic cypher,its a perspective cypher
john wrote his verse from the point of view of headphones n i wrote from the point of view of a bullet
rap from the point of view of whatever the topic is

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i cal my gun my buddy or boy//
yo mom wanted to fuck me but i told her to use her toy//
cuzz wen i come at u it aint gonna be a day of joy//
thats y im standin here today sayin RIP Leroy//
imma walk up to your bitch and say lets play//
not with no toys i mean in the sheets//
cuzz i get on this mic and merk beats//
cuzz imma end this rhyme wit not goodbye but hey//
that y i miis my nigga Jose//

next topic — — — - gold diggers

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aight ima redo mine


I’m holdin -criminals n convicts- -individual’s strongest-
holdin people all they lifetime to -criminals longest-
it’s too much trouble as I see, like -anotha hood-
except no freedom as I see em, and aint no -brotha good-
all I see is fightin, it’s like a -warzone-
the warden’s prez, guards as police, sittin on his -core throne-
these dead prisoners gots early -corner stones-
each cell like cages, on this block as the -borders roam-
filled with notorious gangster, that aint -live it up-
gangbangaz till the muthafuckin end, they neva -give it up-
n lets say it’s how they got there, cuz people wuz -snitchin up-
they threw they life away n they dont -give a fuck-
as I’m written on by graffiti, like -wallz in the ghetto-
new comerz scared for first timez as they -fall on they pillow-
prison, dangerous, community, criminal -habitat-
anythin happenz when they get in, what happens -after that-

next perspective - dead homiez (the right way)

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^^^^^^^
wut u tryna say nigga

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u didnt do it the right way

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this shit’s wierd

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WELL HOW DA FUCK DO I DO IT THE RIGHT WAY

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don’t rap about something rap as you are something