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[Quote] #41
22 Jan 2008 11:14 am
luigimario
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SKITTLES666 wrote: My Real Monster?.. Or.. My Nightmare..

“Your my fucking disease, I don’t know the condition
I cant get away, your my little addiction
Your just a stupid boy, so why dose it hurt so much
Why did I take you back, when you made me fall so hard
How could I love someone, who has no heart
How could I give it all up, for nothing at all
Why cant life make sense, I don’t get nothing at all
When will the pain stop, thats all you make me feel
Do you need to see my blood drops, then will you know its real
I am sorry I ever loved you, I am sorry I believed your lies
You weren’t worth the tears I cried
You let me down, now I cant even look at your face
You once made me smile, but now that emotions not on my face
My laugh is gone, and replaced with screams
Everything is ruined, everything is fake
I just don’t understand how I made such a mistake
I forgave you once, I forgave you twice
I wont forgive you again, I hold this promise till the end
I see now I deserve better then you, someone who wont do everything you do
I know you don’t fell sorry, I know you don’t feel sad
If you see this, I don’t care if your mad
I hope some day you feel, the pain that you made me feel
If all you wanted was to make me hurt, well good job it worked
Out of everything you have just caused me pain and hurt.."


what the hell why the fuck u put swearing in a song omg
[Quote] #42
22 Jan 2008 04:40 pm
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SKITTLES666 wrote: My Real Monster?.. Or.. My Nightmare..

“Your my fucking disease, I don’t know the condition
I cant get away, your my little addiction
Your just a stupid boy, so why dose it hurt so much
Why did I take you back, when you made me fall so hard
How could I love someone, who has no heart
How could I give it all up, for nothing at all
Why cant life make sense, I don’t get nothing at all
When will the pain stop, thats all you make me feel
Do you need to see my blood drops, then will you know its real
I am sorry I ever loved you, I am sorry I believed your lies
You weren’t worth the tears I cried
You let me down, now I cant even look at your face
You once made me smile, but now that emotions not on my face
My laugh is gone, and replaced with screams
Everything is ruined, everything is fake
I just don’t understand how I made such a mistake
I forgave you once, I forgave you twice
I wont forgive you again, I hold this promise till the end
I see now I deserve better then you, someone who wont do everything you do
I know you don’t fell sorry, I know you don’t feel sad
If you see this, I don’t care if your mad
I hope some day you feel, the pain that you made me feel
If all you wanted was to make me hurt, well good job it worked
Out of everything you have just caused me pain and hurt.."


very deep...its great when people can express their feelings through music but I think this is more poetry or spoken word...good job nonetheless
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[Quote] #43
22 Jan 2008 05:39 pm
nlirightnow
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luigimario wrote:
SKITTLES666 wrote: My Real Monster?.. Or.. My Nightmare..

“Your my fucking disease, I don’t know the condition
I cant get away, your my little addiction
Your just a stupid boy, so why dose it hurt so much
Why did I take you back, when you made me fall so hard
How could I love someone, who has no heart
How could I give it all up, for nothing at all
Why cant life make sense, I don’t get nothing at all
When will the pain stop, thats all you make me feel
Do you need to see my blood drops, then will you know its real
I am sorry I ever loved you, I am sorry I believed your lies
You weren’t worth the tears I cried
You let me down, now I cant even look at your face
You once made me smile, but now that emotions not on my face
My laugh is gone, and replaced with screams
Everything is ruined, everything is fake
I just don’t understand how I made such a mistake
I forgave you once, I forgave you twice
I wont forgive you again, I hold this promise till the end
I see now I deserve better then you, someone who wont do everything you do
I know you don’t fell sorry, I know you don’t feel sad
If you see this, I don’t care if your mad
I hope some day you feel, the pain that you made me feel
If all you wanted was to make me hurt, well good job it worked
Out of everything you have just caused me pain and hurt.."


what the hell why the fuck u put swearing in a song omg

huh
[Quote] #44
22 Jan 2008 06:31 pm
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...

thats pretty good.

even though the song anit my kind of butter it is still pretty impresive.


well i find it impresive because im horrible at wrighting music >.<
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[Quote] #45
22 Jan 2008 06:32 pm
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Good song. To bad it made me cry sad
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[Quote] #46
22 Jan 2008 07:13 pm
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if it’s going to be sung as death metal, win.
if it’s going to be sung without guttural vocals, fail.
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[Quote] #47
24 Jan 2008 07:54 pm
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Forsaken Corpse wrote: if it’s going to be sung as death metal, win.
if it’s going to be sung without guttural vocals, fail.

Didint really think that far into it =/
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[Quote] #48
24 Jan 2008 07:54 pm
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Dhem92 wrote: Good song. To bad it made me cry sad

Aww me sorry.
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[Quote] #49
24 Jan 2008 07:56 pm
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syphon pro wrote: ...

thats pretty good.

even though the song anit my kind of butter it is still pretty impresive.


well i find it impresive because im horrible at wrighting music >.<

Yeah I don’t think I am that good but it gets my feelings out.. thats all that matters..
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