| 19 Mar 2008 12:28 pm |
greatestfoolintheuniverse Guest | this is me trying to make rap songs after ive seen all the rappers here. the beginnings.
spaceman cruisin space
i see ya down there cruisin in your cadillac
that wack shit
i rammed it with my space ship
your cars debris are scattered all over
cornfields
and your body is splattered all over my wind shield/
space ninjah
intergalactic soljah
on a quest
to show ya whos the best
out to destroy all contest
i mean competition
im never tired of this repetition of success/
yo, i journeyed to this planet called moviecodec
i met wanna be emcees whos styles are all fucked upped and wack[wrecked]
the wannabes[be] talkin bout shootin,cuttin, and breaking necks/
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| 19 Mar 2008 12:39 pm |
greatestfoolintheuniverse Guest | some later rap drafts:
you cant measure the pressure that im feeling
the signs that youre reading are wrong
because im concealing
that pain that is driving me over the brink
God is the reason why my heart shrinks
at the thought of trying hard in the end we all die hard
we were torn apart, disunity brought to all humanity
death and disease over run us
we pray everyday but still he hides his face from us
our need to feed is hampered by men with greed
i strive to stay alive under rainy clouds
but its not easy to find destiny
i cant see past the shroud
so i sigh and my thoughts focus on those who spiritually die
our problems persist perpetually but at times
i resist sinning even though the devil
winning the worlds heart
to combat calamity i cope with reality
i really need hope
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| 19 Mar 2008 12:46 pm |
greatestfoolintheuniverse Guest | dont think im done when i fail today
because tomorrow im number one
my head held high as im walking away/
i feel the pressure
but theres no action
my reaction is too late
theres too much distraction
mu current state is
at the bottom of the wait list
i cant take this
my mistake is
ignoring my weakness
Hocus-Pocus i gotta focus
on real life situations
and be cautious when near temptations
the Devil is a pro
when it comes to felling foes
so God is who i chose
with him the devil i will oppose
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| 19 Mar 2008 12:49 pm |
greatestfoolintheuniverse Guest | thas about et. em gots one poem still :]
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