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I agree. Goodluck. If I was in your country (where ever that is) I’d vote for you.

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What happened to the other suicide thread. Is it just me or has it vanished? Oh well, I guess we’re just gonna have to revive this one then.

Don’t you think this is great?

I hurt myself today
to see if I still feel
I focus on the pain
the only thing that’s real
the needle tears a hole
the old familiar sting
try to kill it all away
but I remember everything
what have I become
my sweetest friend
everyone I know goes away in the end
and you could have it all
my empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt
I wear this crown of shit
upon my liar’s chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair
beneath the stains of time
a feeling disappears
you are someone else
I am still right here
what have I become
my sweetest friend
everyone I know
goes away in the end
and you could have it all
my empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt
if I could start again
a million miles away
I would keep myself
I would find a way....

AAO SEDAH

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*wipes tear from eye* That was amazeing.

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That was sort of depressing to me.

AAO SEDAH

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Yeah, it was. But that was why it was so god. I was well written.

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I like happy poetry.

AAO SEDAH

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Happy poetry. Like, about what.

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Probably about birds and butterflies, rainbows and sunsets, fairies and pixies... Probably shit like that...lol

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Not really no. That’s stupid.

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Not a soul understands,
Not a being can know,
The scars on my hands,
And the feelings I can’t show.

They tell me I should wait
For a new time: tomorrow.
But I don’t take the bait
I must NOW end my sorrow.

Over, under, around the loop,
My hands work toward both death and hope.
Into a perfect neck-fit hoop
I fashion the old and yellow rope.

Atop a sturdy oak ceiling beam
I tie the rope with an intricate knot.
The skin will tear at my neck’s seam,
I kick, and flail, then still, I rot.

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do you like my poem? post if you thinks it’s good!








my email is 87hothottie@gmail.com

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i really liked that. Black Hydra Xc, did you like it?

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Your poem was good Mr. Rogers but I think poems have to be personal experiences, something you’re going through or have been through. That obviously didn’t happen to you cos you posted it. I’m not saying go and kill yourself to give the poem more meaning, I’m just saying it must be part of you , it must be your story.

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i thinkt it’s obviously about a recurring dream he has. sounds personal to me. he is tormented by the dreams, and he thinks suicide is his only source of “hope."

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Yes I did like that. That’s more of my taste.

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hydra, isn’t it sad that some people just don’t understand. don’t you think that only someone who knows what it is like could have written that poem?

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I liked the poem. I really hadn’t thought about hanging myself.

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yeah realy good, i like how descriotive you are. it is so real.

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Mr Rogers - That really depends. You see, someone can think they understand and write about what they think they understand. Someone might have an enormous imagination, someone might have uncomprehensible intelligence and assume that’s how it is, so on.

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id been suicidal for years, started cuting my wrists, taking overdoses,spent my 16th birthday in hospital mixing 10 cans of fosters with half an extasy pill and 23 50mg of my own antidepresants. it fucked me up and ever since ive learned that taking your own life is selfish and theres no point. at the time it seems the only thing you can do. ask to see you doctor and start taking antidepresants, you will start to feel better,it just takes time. trust me i now have a great job and am the happiest ive been for ages.