Yeah I know how that is.
Its starting to get hot down here, which is good I was getting sick of the snow.
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^Joshy & I Made <3
#25
25 Apr 2008 08:13 pm
toddjanka_101
Guest
hey guys i just made my first rap, mind you i’m 15 and in 10th grade so be positive and tell me what u think of it?
As i jump out of bed
All these rhymes in my head
out the door, rock and roll down the street,
I two step my feet to a gangsta beat
I grab my clip and i’m ready to roll
Hid my cash and throw in a skoal
Why did you try to rap in my show
Screw your ass and your 5$ whores
I pull up lookin fly in my Caddy 64,
walk up to the club and knockin on the door
I have my 9 that i’m always packin
the rap games startin and the beats keep stackin
No boy you aint got anymore time
throw down your shit, i’m ready to rhyme
Your a shame to the name
of the street thug game
You rhymes don’t flow and your momma’s a hoe,
go back out the door,u got nothing to show
Your in the wrong town,
lets see u try and take my crown
After this rap you betta step back,
or i’ll throw down my 9 and bust out some caps
The hoods all hear, ready to cheer
too bad all your raps, aint sincere
Your not ready for my skill,
But i’m ready to kill
Your not worthy to hear my dope shit beats,
So get your little punk ass, off my streets!
#26
27 Apr 2008 04:52 am
sydtakes
Guest
yap i get it, first ov all congrats
u da only guy so far to spill out his guts
but leme ask somethin, u ready to fall second
coz u on ma front seat, n am about explode in a couple seconds
blow u out of the game, damn am sorry u jus got your fame, i mean CHEAP FAME
u shud be happy am dissin u coz A got game
dat means am promotin' u N ure like ma commodity
but shit i done sold out, so pliz accept ma apology
u goin down boy the king’z got here, all em cowards i said n say am ryt here, like a stick o blunt i lock the game here
............yo man, hit www.letsbattle.com
wun
#27
27 Apr 2008 10:51 pm
KrnMafia92
Guest
Yo yo, you im’a teach you a lesson boys.
Yo to rap a rhyme, you gotta have that feel
Cuz this aint a game, you in it for real
If you be slanging out rhymes that say you a gangster
u prolly number 1, the number 1 wangsta
cuz i know u aint feeling the rhymes you write
cuz if u feeling it, then ure rhymes be tight
Stop trying to be the kid in a grown-up game
Just trying to get your 15 seconds of fame
Guess what, boy? Try to get another claim.
When you see me slanging it, your mouth’s agape
When your see/hear my lyrics, you want them on tape
Cuz i know thats how much u look up to me
Learn some words, then you can step up to me
Cuz im the one who possesses the lyrics and beat
Ill give you the skill, if you find an empirical seat
Ill only give it to you, if u can feel the rhymes
Cuz otherwise, itd be a waste, a damn waste of my time
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