| 30 Apr 2008 10:53 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26  Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | I make it burn whhen you pee
Im the pain you realy cant see
I have the record for the longest killing spree
Magic Johnsonis the only one who got rid of me
Some people put ''First'' in front of my name
Live is what I take
Infact, I can take in with a simple mistake
Im your what your Health Class warned u about
Im what Holy Nuns told you about
Some times, I’k make red come out your spout
I kill 70% of the deaths in Africa
Im so commom now
Im the new Asthma
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what do i think of this poem part 2 That sucked ************* 50% (votes so far 1) Wow, thats deep ************* 50% (votes so far 1) U shud stick 2 raps 0% Your a Emo 0% That was Evil 0% that was okay 0% Only registered users may vote.
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| 01 May 2008 04:45 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | bump
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| 01 May 2008 04:46 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 21 Joined: 05 Oct 2007 Posts: 3,485 OFFLINE | The poll lacks “Just no."
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| 01 May 2008 04:50 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | LordMarluxia wrote:
The poll lacks “Just no.“
that was mean.
I respect your answer.
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| 01 May 2008 04:50 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55 Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
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| 01 May 2008 04:51 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 21Joined: 05 Oct 2007 Posts: 3,485 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
Oh, my. I didn’t have guts to say that.
You, sir, win the interwebz for being mean.
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| 01 May 2008 04:51 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
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| 01 May 2008 04:52 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | 98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.
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| 01 May 2008 04:53 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.
Do u mind telling me wat it was about.
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| 01 May 2008 04:54 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.
Do u mind telling me wat it was about.
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| 01 May 2008 04:54 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | 98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.
Do u mind telling me wat it was about.
Why should I tell you? You made it. You tell me.
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| 01 May 2008 04:55 pm |
The one and forever only... Rep: 36 Joined: 11 Feb 2008 Posts: 10,620 OFFLINE | Phail it sucked so much I purposely misspelled “FAIL"
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God is evil God is pure God is neither God is God
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| 01 May 2008 04:57 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | 1indainfinite wrote:
Phail it sucked so much I purposely misspelled “FAIL”
No, you spelled it right.
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| 01 May 2008 04:57 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 21Joined: 05 Oct 2007 Posts: 3,485 OFFLINE | My poem is much better than this gar-bage.
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| 01 May 2008 04:58 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 26Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 4,166 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
98supra wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.
OKay, I respect wat u say.
May I ask Did u understand it.
Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.
Do u mind telling me wat it was about.
Why should I tell you? You made it. You tell me.
Aids
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| 01 May 2008 05:00 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS
AIDS
by Judy Burnette
AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.
We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.
So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.
You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.
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| 01 May 2008 05:01 pm |
The one and forever only... Rep: 36Joined: 11 Feb 2008 Posts: 10,620 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS
AIDS
by Judy Burnette
AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.
We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.
So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.
You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.
Boring...
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God is evil God is pure God is neither God is God
Don’t FUCK with my insanity I’ll warp your REALiTY | |
| 01 May 2008 05:01 pm |
Genibus Nitito Canus Rep: 55Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 21,701 OFFLINE | 1indainfinite wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS
AIDS
by Judy Burnette
AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.
We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.
So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.
You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.
Boring...
hahaha
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| 01 May 2008 05:02 pm |
The one and forever only... Rep: 36Joined: 11 Feb 2008 Posts: 10,620 OFFLINE | NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
1indainfinite wrote:
NihilusRavager7780 wrote:
If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS
AIDS
by Judy Burnette
AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.
We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.
So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.
You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.
Boring...
hahaha
I just don’t see life like I used too
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God is evil God is pure God is neither God is God
Don’t FUCK with my insanity I’ll warp your REALiTY | |
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