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[Quote] #21
05 Jun 2008 10:50 pm
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Your name is Emiley.


My first girlfriend name aws Emily

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05 Jun 2008 10:51 pm
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98supra wrote: Your name is Emiley.


My first girlfriend name aws Emily


I’m sorry, am I meant to care, or be touched by this? cause I’m not.

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05 Jun 2008 10:52 pm
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drummergirl92 wrote:
98supra wrote: Your name is Emiley.


My first girlfriend name aws Emily


I’m sorry, am I meant to care, or be touched by this? cause I’m not.



niether, why.

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[Quote] #24
05 Jun 2008 10:53 pm
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Darth Nihilus wrote:
firewolf81 wrote: This one was well recieved by my peers.


There’s a pain in the darkness.
That I cant withstand.
It haunts me.
It taunts me.
Slowly driving me mad.

It tears at my soul.
It rips me apart.
This pain in the darkness.
Is destroying my heart.

My mind knows one thing.
My body Another.
How long must I stay here.
Before I become someone other.

This battle has raged on.
for years now within.
The war scars, they mold me.
They taint me with sin.

I can not lose.
This battle you see.
For destroy things I will
and evil i’ll be.

So beware the darkness.
Always keep it in check.
Your life will be shattered.
Forever

Live

And

Regret.


I can see why. It seems very deep.


There was much analysis done on it and there were many thoughts on the structure and maning of the content, but I wasn’t telling em what it meantwink

Sometimes half the fun is not knowing.

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05 Jun 2008 10:54 pm
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firewolf81 wrote:
Darth Nihilus wrote:
firewolf81 wrote: This one was well recieved by my peers.


There’s a pain in the darkness.
That I cant withstand.
It haunts me.
It taunts me.
Slowly driving me mad.

It tears at my soul.
It rips me apart.
This pain in the darkness.
Is destroying my heart.

My mind knows one thing.
My body Another.
How long must I stay here.
Before I become someone other.

This battle has raged on.
for years now within.
The war scars, they mold me.
They taint me with sin.

I can not lose.
This battle you see.
For destroy things I will
and evil i’ll be.

So beware the darkness.
Always keep it in check.
Your life will be shattered.
Forever

Live

And

Regret.


I can see why. It seems very deep.


There was much analysis done on it and there were many thoughts on the structure and maning of the content, but I wasn’t telling em what it meantwink

Sometimes half the fun is not knowing.


I know. shocked

It makes it more interesting.

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05 Jun 2008 10:54 pm
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firewolf81 wrote:
Darth Nihilus wrote:
firewolf81 wrote: This one was well recieved by my peers.


There’s a pain in the darkness.
That I cant withstand.
It haunts me.
It taunts me.
Slowly driving me mad.

It tears at my soul.
It rips me apart.
This pain in the darkness.
Is destroying my heart.

My mind knows one thing.
My body Another.
How long must I stay here.
Before I become someone other.

This battle has raged on.
for years now within.
The war scars, they mold me.
They taint me with sin.

I can not lose.
This battle you see.
For destroy things I will
and evil i’ll be.

So beware the darkness.
Always keep it in check.
Your life will be shattered.
Forever

Live

And

Regret.


I can see why. It seems very deep.


There was much analysis done on it and there were many thoughts on the structure and maning of the content, but I wasn’t telling em what it meantwink

Sometimes half the fun is not knowing.


Oh and the title was The Turmoil Within

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05 Jun 2008 10:57 pm
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firewolf81 wrote:
firewolf81 wrote:
Darth Nihilus wrote:
firewolf81 wrote: This one was well recieved by my peers.


There’s a pain in the darkness.
That I cant withstand.
It haunts me.
It taunts me.
Slowly driving me mad.

It tears at my soul.
It rips me apart.
This pain in the darkness.
Is destroying my heart.

My mind knows one thing.
My body Another.
How long must I stay here.
Before I become someone other.

This battle has raged on.
for years now within.
The war scars, they mold me.
They taint me with sin.

I can not lose.
This battle you see.
For destroy things I will
and evil i’ll be.

So beware the darkness.
Always keep it in check.
Your life will be shattered.
Forever

Live

And

Regret.


I can see why. It seems very deep.


There was much analysis done on it and there were many thoughts on the structure and maning of the content, but I wasn’t telling em what it meantwink

Sometimes half the fun is not knowing.


Oh and the title was The Turmoil Within


That poem reminds me of a song.



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05 Jun 2008 11:03 pm
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Im feeling like some one is actin very bitchy

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05 Jun 2008 11:04 pm
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drummergirl92 wrote: It’s added to the pile of possibilities, there’s now 4 in there, I sleep on it, and come back tomorrow, and one of them will jump out at me, so that’s the one I’ll use.

Ha ha ....ur way of choosin` for assignment way too fantastic...ha ha...what if none of them jump out...what u`d do..? O_^

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06 Jun 2008 01:14 am
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dukedas wrote:
drummergirl92 wrote: It’s added to the pile of possibilities, there’s now 4 in there, I sleep on it, and come back tomorrow, and one of them will jump out at me, so that’s the one I’ll use.

Ha ha ....ur way of choosin` for assignment way too fantastic...ha ha...what if none of them jump out...what u`d do..? O_^


if none jumped out, I’d take the one that Robin gave me. He gave up on it, and so he ;eft all the notes for me smiley I’d change the words a little of course

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06 Jun 2008 01:22 am
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its 1:22 and i got school tomarrow

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[Quote] #32
06 Jun 2008 01:26 am
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okay, bye. see you tomorrow

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[Quote] #33
11 Jun 2008 09:18 pm
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okay, I’ve chosen to do A dream within a dream, and I need to know if I"m on the right track with my thinking...

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11 Jun 2008 09:29 pm
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we’re meant to be analysing it, and I was wondering what you guys think of the poem and what it means, I have a rough idea, but I don’t think i’t looking hard enough.. I think I’m missing something...

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