this is a song i wrote tell me what you think

Wannabe
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y dont u rite a song about killing or sumthing a littel more creative every 1 writes songs about sum 1 the whant to be with i wrote a song about masterbating over a dead bodie
cum on now u can do it, be creative!!!!!

kieami

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I write to=)Very good!How long have you been writing?

AMerica is the bomb

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That song is terrible. Are trying to be the next britney spears with that piece of teenie bopper shit you call a song?

Kristen

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i like the song you wrote

kieami

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I play acoustic my music is not like brittney spears.I like all the poetry and songs i have read on hear.As long it is from the heart is is awsome!I write all my own stuff.plus i play sing in country-blues band.It is more blues.Btittney does not sing the blueslolPlus she does not play guitar or piano

Kristen

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you’re right. Britney just sits there and whines to her manager or whoever to get her a Perrier with lemon while someone else writes the lyrics to her songs, then she sings it, then people edit it because she can’t sing. (no offense to britney fans but i can’t stand her)

kieami

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I cant either hopefully she will hate me soon lol you are cool kristen=)

Wannabe
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AAAAAAAAAAAAH MY FUCKIN EARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1WAT THA FUCK WAS THAT JUST NOW MAN/WOMAN WHOEVER THE FUCK U R U SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shizzle 2

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i agree with the briney stuff she probably cant sing for shit an ppl jus inhanse it for her.
80’s an 90’s rock u cant beat it!oh an srry i missed out the 60’s sorry jimi (hendrix).these days any1 can become a singer all they need is the money to get started unless you have talent ofcourse.your song was good but every1 writes about stuff like that be differnt an your songs will be even better.keep at it!

DestinyGuy 678

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hmmm wats the music sound like?

The drummer
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I dont really like rap. But I respect it and your songs sound ok reading it. I almost heard real music in it.