| 27 Jul 2005 12:38 am |
Loren Guest | i know this is a bit weird, but i started writting this book, and i thought i would see if u liked the first paragragh
This Morning,when i opened my eyes and saw the spring sky above me as i lay in the shallow boat, i realised that my long journey from the heart of the forest was over, and that i had come home again.
Oak lodge was there, across the meadow, empty and silent.And yet i could not step throught the trees nd go to the houseas if the wood, so difficult to enter from the out side eccept alonge the brook, was now reluctant to let me go..............blah blah blah
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| 27 Jul 2005 12:50 am |
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:04 am |
Regular Rep: 0 Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 160 OFFLINE | well.....?
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:05 am |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 160 OFFLINE | actually,it is probably better than I could do!
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:06 am |
Loren Guest | u like the start? i think im gonna write wen im a bit older, its fun. (geeky loren regrets saying that)
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:07 am |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 160 OFFLINE | i love to write.i think it helps your soul and your spirit.
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:08 am |
Loren Guest | i love to write songs too, its anti-stressful,lol
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| 27 Jul 2005 03:41 am |
Harper Collins Guest | I like the blah blah blah part better
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| 27 Jul 2005 12:56 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 160 OFFLINE | Why is everyone (some) being rude to me?lol I never said I was a film maker,I am interested in making a film.I may end up leaving this site I dont need anymore drama in my life I come on here to talk and maybe get a good laugh.I dont come on here to be insulted or ridiculed
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| 27 Jul 2005 01:10 pm |
keiami Guest | i come on here for a good laugh too, too bad the jokes on you lard ass
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| 27 Jul 2005 02:10 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 160 OFFLINE | I like being called lard ass it kinda turns me on.I have never been called that before,actually I finally have a butt now did not have one for a while well........since I AM SO FAT lol
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| 27 Jul 2005 09:44 pm |
Kristen. Guest | i like the story. And, i like writing as well. Mostly drama & romance. THat probably sounds rather stupid, but i like it a lot
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| 27 Jul 2005 11:42 pm |
Loren Guest | for sum reason i like war books. i find them real cool, i sound like one of those little geeky boys that sit in the corner and read, but i cant help it. I like “Tommorrow, when the war ended” its good. but u prob dont care so um yeh
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