better rapper

(yo cheak it)i just started rapping and my name is dom_p ill kill anybody in this freestyleing shit u step to me its like beening sent to iruq u start off good comeing laying on your back all you guys is lame im not saying im just spraying u go against me yo freestyle life its over im goin on yo soft dont wanna go on u hard westside and crips fuck all yowl bloods

Ur Funny and Phonny like Tony the damn tigger

yo u shit is whack like the shit that come out my ass crack my flow so nice i leave u white rollin dice and um a hustler got so much words ta spit like um alrady 19 u couldnt bet me if u words was color blind and spitless suntin like a premature dick my heat busen like glass soon ta be in da hall of fame but u suten like slick back hair nigga or should i say bicth

A little rap I made up;

Dedicate
Dedicate

Uh

This one right here goes out
To my homie with the drink
Nah mean

He said, I write what I see
Write to make it right, don’t like where I be
I’d like to make a life to sights on TV
Quite the great life, so nice and easy
See, now you can still die from that
But it’s better than not being alive from straps
Agree, a Mead Notebook and a Bic
That clip when it’s pushed in a whack xxx beat
That’s a track that’s weak that he got last week
Cause everybody in the stu is like “That’s that heat”
A bass heavy melody with a sample from the seventies
With a screwed up hook that went

Stack that cheese
Something, Something, Something...
Stack that cheese
Mother, Sister, Cousin...
Stack that cheese
He couldn’t think of nothing...
Stack that cheese
He turns down the beat, Writer’s block and peads

Crying from the next room a baby in need
Of some pampers and some food and a place to sleep
That plus a black Cadillac on D’s
Is what keep him on track to be a great MC

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved me

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved my life

Raps north side so he rocks them braids
Eleven hundred friends on his myspace page
'Stack that cheese' got seven hundred plays
Producer made him take it down, said he had to pay
Open Mic champ two weeks in a row
XD boy with a B-boy flow
Glow like Leroy you should see boy go
Got a daddy serving life and a brother on the road
Best homie in a grave, tatted up while in the cage
Minute maid got his momma working like a slave
Down baby momma who he really had to honor
Cause she was his biggest fan, even let him use her Honda to
Drive up to Dallas with a open up for amatuers
Let him keep her debit cards so he could put gas in it
Told her when he get home he gon' take her to the galleria
Buy her everything but the mannequins, ya dig

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved me

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved my life

His man called, said “Ya time might be now.
They played ya freestyle over Wipe Me Down.
They played it two times, said it might be crowned
As the best thing out the H-Town in a while."
He picked up his son with a great, big smile
Rapped every single word to the newborn child
Then he put him down and went back to the kitchen
And put on another beat and got back to the mission, to
Get his momma out the hood, put her somewhere in the woods
Keep his lady looking good, have her rolling like she should
Show us home is this’a way, other than that flipping yay
Bail his homie outta jail, put a lawyer on his case
Throw a concert for the school, show the shoulders that it’s cool
Throw some candy on the caddy, chucked a duece, and act a fool
Man it feels good when it happens like that
Two days from going back to selling crack, yessir

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved me

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved my life

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved me

One you never heard of, I...
Push it hard to further the...
Grind, I feel like murder but...
Hip Hop has saved my life

Hip Hop has saved my life

Hip Hop has saved my life

Hip Hop has saved my life

Help me raise my Habamon!

My thougts louder than the sound dat a baretta make/ wat id rather say is i dont rap I just meditate/ I elevate but Id be damned if im ever late/ I levitate like space,just forgettin weight/ my minds sayin for heavens sake just get the cake/ get ya plate if not, ull just end up ate/ like some peppered steak, in other words it seperates u from being the next nd the next to wait/ in if u extra fake then its just best to hate/ cuz if not ya get shot like injections/ wait dnt let me catch u in the hood chillin in my section/ cuz ima wreck ya day nd prolly getaway/ nd wen cops cum thru trynna investigate/ u better never say name, where I rest or stay/ I murk rite off the back , they won’t even have a case/ so fuck witness protection, I don’t forget cuz ill teach u a lesson

My thougts louder than the sound dat a baretta make/ wat id rather say is i dont rap I just meditate/ I elevate but Id be damned if im ever late/ I levitate like space,just forgettin weight/ my minds sayin for heavens sake just get the cake/ get ya plate if not, ull just end up ate/ like some peppered steak, in other words it seperates u from being the next nd the next to wait/ in if u extra fake then its just best to hate/ cuz if not ya get shot like injections/ wait dnt let me catch u in the hood chillin in my section/ cuz ima wreck ya day nd prolly getaway/ nd wen cops cum thru trynna investigate/ u better never say name, where I rest or stay/ I murk rite off the back , they won’t even have a case/ so fuck witness protection, I don’t forget cuz ill teach u a lesson/

king jon is a good rapper

shanepiom wrote: king jon is a good rapper

lol, indeed I am I don’t know who you are but you speak the truth.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

yo check it, this thread made me laugh really hard.

0000000000 let me battle d0m_p